literature

Loveless Soul - Poem.

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Smiles of content drift from each grin,
Soleful eyes glimmer deeply. One soft gesture turn to be adoring love.
Lights of my soul flicker above,
As my undying love is shattered.
Tears roll gracefully down and broken hearted souls cheek,
As they watch their anchor leave with out a second glance back.
Dreamful hopes died, under unforgiveness of one's soul.
They cry in sorrow, from the endless love of their heart,
With no return, fire turns to ice.
This is my first written piece on DA. Be judgemental if you wish. I have been a tad sad as the poem reflects that as well.

It is pretty terrible so I am open to feedback, thanks.

Enjoy~
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topazcat511's avatar
this is beautiful. well done